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Can't say I'm a fan of these clock crew or lock legion movies but I give them a chance. The computer voice is really starting to get on my nerves though. I liked the idea for your movie, but I think it could have been executed better. While making it you should have thought to yourself, "would I understand this movie if I hadn't read the Raven
?" I have read the Raven and I really enjoyed it, but your movie doesn't really make sense unless you know the story. The graphics need a bit of work and you need more sound effects and maybe a longer sound loop for the song. Nice work though.