Can't say I'm a fan of these clock crew or lock legion movies but I give them a chance. The computer voice is really starting to get on my nerves though. I liked the idea for your movie, but I think it could have been executed better. While making it you should have thought to yourself, "would I understand this movie if I hadn't read the Raven
?" I have read the Raven and I really enjoyed it, but your movie doesn't really make sense unless you know the story. The graphics need a bit of work and you need more sound effects and maybe a longer sound loop for the song. Nice work though.
Well since my target audience knows the story, I didn't try to retell the story, just give my interpretation. And yes, I'm one of those lock's who prefers to do voice acting, however my microphone decided to quit on me today. I kept Speakonia to a minimal.
Beautiful Fucking Tits!
I voted five just because Fear and Loathing kicks fucking ass!
But seriously, you need to make your movie longer and have more of a point than just some clips from a good movie and some crap animation. The artwork was good, now you gotta do something with it.
This isn't one of my better movies, I just had a jolt of inspiration and stuff.
Nothing like a bloody penguin genocide to brighten up your day. Nice work.
Make the rest
Looks good but it is VERY short. Make the rest of the movie. Maybe it could even be a series...
Stealing makes people go blind
Its a bad idea to make something that reminds people of something that was much better. Your movie was basically just a really bad version of the Simpsons episode where Bart and Milhouse drink the super slushy. Don't steal material, it makes people's eyes hurt.
I have no idea what you're talking about... This is nothing like that episode. You're crazy.
And as for your eyes... sorry about that, didn't consider it... but then again, maybe you just have a physical condition which causes your eyes to be highly sensitive, and your brain to perceive things as Simpsons episodes which never were.
Work in progress
I can imagine this video being very good. So that is a major plus for you. You need to draw and animate MUCH better. You should NOT submit a movie unless that sound syncs with the video; it is extremely annoying when the sound and the video do not link up. I could hardly see what was going on some of the time. Work on your drawing skill and your animation, sync up the music with the video and hide the mouse cursor during the movie. This movie can be really good if you just fix all the problems. I advise you to not submit it again until it is perfect. But at that time I bet you will get a very high score...maybe even some awards. Nice try.
Very nice music video. Many people just hope that the song they use will get them a good score but you actually have talent in animation. Can't wait til the next video you do.
You have good potential
This movie was a little short and I think a story might be helpful but you have good potential as a flash artist. The artwork was very nice but the animation could be imporved upon. I gave it a 5 to save it. Keep up the good work and I'm sure your next entry will be much better.
Yes, I must admit I spent almost as much time drawing as annimating, probably not a good proportion, but yeah I think my next attempt will turn out better!
Have you seen this thing?!?!?!?!??!?!??!?!?!?!
All I have to say is, WOW! I mean I am in awe. I have never seen anything as great as this movie. If you don't think that this is one of the greatest movies on Portal ever, then in my opinion you can go to hell. Hell isn't that bad of a place if you think about it, I mean after you get over the heat. You get to hang out with Satan, which is probably just about as great as it can get. Also you get to see red a lot, red is a great color. I like red and could just see it all over! Wow look at all the red dots, ohhh boy...I'm im trouble...
Possibly the best Portal entry ever!!!!
I would have to say, that without a doubt this is the best Portal entry I have seen ever! All you people that rate this movie poorly, WTF! You people need to actualy see the message that this video is trying to get across, and then you will realize that it is the greatest Portal movie, and possibly just plain the greatest movie, EVER!!!!
- Now go back and change your vote!
(for those of you that voted poorly)
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